坑爹啊，100分变成30分了。 1.Shouldn’t complain about it 没有主语. 2.She is care about you. she cares about you. 3.Here are some advice for you. advice 不可数，here is some advice for you. 4.You should listen to your mother said. 宾语从句缺连接代词what，you should listen to what your mother said. 5.You could smile to your mother everyday. could 改为should 6.She talk too much is care about you. 两个谓语，改为从句。 Why she talks so much is because that she cares about you. 7.You shouldn’t angry with you mother. angry 是形容词，作谓语前面加be。 8.Many students have the same problem likes you. the same ....as. like 改为as。 9.I think your mother will happy. happy是形容词，做谓语前面加be。 10.Your mother is love you. is 多余，your　mother loves you. 11.Please don’t annoyed. 助动词后接动词原形。please don't annoy. 12.You should say thanks to she. 人称代词宾格，she改为her。 13.Have a trying. try可以做名词，trying改为try。 14.Please be smile. smile可以做动词，祈使句直接用动词原形，please　smile。 15.You shouldn’t get alone with yourself. get along with.you should get along well with yourself.(这个句子看不懂。改错的话未免也改的太多了点吧) 16.She’s really love you. she really loves you. 17.You should talk her your problems. talk with sb about sth. you should talk with her about your problems. 18.Good luckily. good　luck. 19.These advice may be helpful. These pieces of advice may be helpful.&the advice may be helpful.

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